Tuesday, November 8, 2011

I am Falling


My wings were so bad
all rusted and torn
from anger and hate
to arrogance and scorn
They wouldn't even flap
being so out of repair
but the thing that hurt most is you never cared…
It’s Hard to fly with
these broken wings
I am screaming your name
catch me I am falling….
My heart is bleeding
and it won’t survive for long
the skin on me is burning
by the fires of the outrage flare
and I am falling….
With arms stretched out
Crying out to you
hoping you’ll hear my plea
wondering what I did to evoke such wrath upon me
crying loudly and I am falling….
Crashing to the ground my body crumpled in pain
My wings broken and bleeding
My mind going insane
With my last breath I whisper your name
Hurray I am Falling…..
Assemblage By at

19 comments:

  1. UnknownNovember 8, 2011 at 6:59 AM

    Good work once again! :)

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  2. WonderWallNovember 8, 2011 at 7:05 AM

    Thanks Imroz.

    Cheers!!

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  3. RajNovember 8, 2011 at 7:28 AM

    i had promised myself i would never fall again. now, i read this.
    and i think i might just break that promise now :)

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  4. WonderWallNovember 8, 2011 at 7:29 AM

    @ Raj... bt who is going to catch you :P

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  5. RushingQuarkNovember 8, 2011 at 7:40 AM

    I jus loved the last line....Hurray i m falling....it is jus amazing how u have blended pain,passion and happiness together...simply awesome..

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  6. WonderWallNovember 8, 2011 at 8:03 AM

    Thanks Soham... <3

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  7. Gauri MathurNovember 8, 2011 at 8:07 AM

    Well said Soham!

    Good Work Deva!!

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  8. WonderWallNovember 8, 2011 at 8:12 AM

    Thanks Gauri... <3

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  9. RahulNovember 8, 2011 at 8:23 AM

    good..really goood...:-)

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  10. WonderWallNovember 8, 2011 at 8:55 AM

    Thanks Rahul... :)

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  11. VyankateshNovember 13, 2011 at 6:12 AM

    Wish you will rise like a phoenix again!!

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  12. RajNovember 13, 2011 at 7:59 AM

    its not in falling and getting caught that the fun lies. its in falling and hurting yourself.

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  13. WonderWallNovember 14, 2011 at 3:18 AM

    @ Vyankatesh... Thanks. :)

    @ Raj... there is no fun in getting hurt.. >.<

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  14. RajNovember 14, 2011 at 7:32 AM

    sure there is. pain is beautiful :)

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  15. WonderWallNovember 14, 2011 at 8:16 AM

    Ok Yaar you win... :P

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  16. Ashish NandwaniDecember 13, 2011 at 12:04 PM

    I felt something like this when i wrote a poem similar to this ,cheers!

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  17. WonderWallDecember 13, 2011 at 11:47 PM

    @ Ashish... I'll love to read your poems... do send me url. :)

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  18. UnknownJune 6, 2012 at 3:17 AM

    Accidentally stumbled up here.
    Beautifully written :)
    You should write more often!

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  19. WonderWallJune 6, 2012 at 9:37 AM

    @Nishant Garg... Thanks Dear... will write something soon... I more into photography now days... :)

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