Monday, June 8, 2009

Alone


I walked in the lonely streets,
thinking of the daily trend.
How should a stranger greet?
to make a new TRUE friend.

No one is truly intimate,
its all in the POCKET'S state.
A mere smite of fate,
which i knew it late.

The mind is worried
and the feelings are burried.
My heart does moan,
pity , for now its a stone.

When many were to gather
but none care to bother.
The eyes began to weep,
Tears rolled down the cheek..
Late night i was asleep,
Ah! a nice " HIDE AND SEEK".

I woke up from the dream,
it really made me scream.
The agony of my tone,
oh! i was all ALONE.
Assemblage By at
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39 comments:

  1. Gauri MathurJune 8, 2009 at 3:05 AM

    Nice baby!
    :)
    Beautifully Written!
    :)
    Keep Empowering!!
    God Bless you and take care !!
    :-)

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  2. kimJune 8, 2009 at 3:15 AM

    thanks for ur comments dear....... :)
    lub ya

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  3. AnonymousJune 8, 2009 at 3:44 AM

    wow superb :)...beautifully written with the right bits of humour.kudos 2 U gal :) ....

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  4. kimJune 8, 2009 at 3:53 AM

    Thanks dear... welcome to my blog :)

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  5. ArvJune 8, 2009 at 5:05 AM

    that was amazing...

    I loved the flow of it... the read was a narrative poetry... beautiful..

    do take care mate... cheers...

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  6. Amal BoseJune 8, 2009 at 5:32 AM

    that was really nice..
    loved it.

    take care :)

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  7. kimJune 8, 2009 at 6:43 AM

    Thanks @ Amal

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  8. smJune 8, 2009 at 12:27 PM

    very nice poem like it ,picture
    is also perfect and beautiful.

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  9. kimJune 8, 2009 at 12:33 PM

    thanks sam :)

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  10. CreativityJune 8, 2009 at 11:20 PM

    Beautiful :D

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  11. WonderWallJune 9, 2009 at 4:41 AM

    Thanks dear... :)

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  12. BloggerJune 10, 2009 at 12:43 AM

    Nice One!!

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  13. AnonymousJune 10, 2009 at 1:38 AM

    beautiful

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  14. kimJune 10, 2009 at 3:06 AM

    @ Rebel

    Thanks Dear

    @ Silently expressed

    Thanks for your appreciation

    Take care both of you.... :)

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  15. DamirJune 10, 2009 at 4:15 AM

    fantastic......purely a masterpiece.....hats down for this creation of yours:)

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  16. kimJune 10, 2009 at 4:30 AM

    @ Damir

    Thanks alot dear.... Keep commenting... :)

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  17. alxJune 10, 2009 at 5:15 AM

    "No one is truly intimate,
    its all in the POCKET'S state.
    A mere smite of fate,
    which i knew it late. "

    hw so true...nice poem

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  18. AnonymousJune 10, 2009 at 10:52 PM

    Hi dear..
    1st time visit..and I was so happy!!
    Lovely poems..
    loved each and every lines..
    tc

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  19. WonderWallJune 11, 2009 at 3:02 AM

    @ alex

    Thanks dear..... i love these lines too

    @ Slow Processor

    Thanks dear... :)

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  20. Gaurav SharmaJune 12, 2009 at 12:50 PM

    heyo!!
    nice one....but jus explain me the meaning of 2nd para..cudnt get the clear cut meaning of it..

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  21. Shravan RNJune 16, 2009 at 6:34 AM

    and this is a beautiful piece of work :) Move on :) hav fun.

    shravan.

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  22. Shravan RNJune 16, 2009 at 6:34 AM

    oh btw, first time here, followin form now on :)

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  23. CreativityJune 19, 2009 at 8:05 AM

    Dear, visit here in ur free tym arsahana.blogspot.com

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  24. bARE-eYED sUNJune 22, 2009 at 4:20 AM

    geeze, Kim,

    yer either missing someone or feelin' lonely. :-(

    'tis great writing-fodder. :-)

    thanks,


    ..
    .ero

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  25. UnknownJune 27, 2009 at 8:41 AM

    I have tagged you for the 15 books tag..check out my blog... tag me back with ur favourite 15 books...

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  26. anupamaJune 30, 2009 at 2:10 AM

    dear kim,
    really touching.may i tell u dear,we are always alone.these close frienships and emotions and pack ups and break ups make the life a hell........still,somewhere someone loves you so dearly,helping you to be stable in mind.........so,smile now and try to see the unknown mind......[hey,could be mine!]
    sasneham,
    anu

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  27. AnonymousJuly 5, 2009 at 6:20 AM

    B.E.A.U.T.I.F.U.L

    The flow was brilliant :) Love every line :)

    Keep writing!!! :)

    Have a great Sunday :)

    Cheers!!!

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  28. Siddhesh KabeJuly 10, 2009 at 10:23 PM

    hey really nice poem....:)

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  29. PrabhjotJuly 16, 2009 at 8:55 AM

    Hi! i visited your blog for the first time and i really appreciate all your stuff which you had posted over here.

    About this poem toh i'll only say that now you get 29th comment, so really you can't repeat"opening up from the dream,
    i find me all alone" :)

    (I joined your google friend connect.. Would be a regular visitor 4m now)

    Best wishes!!

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  30. anugrahJuly 16, 2009 at 2:15 PM

    well....i can gush 'bout da poetry...like my 29 predecessors.....but i'd be redundant....so, i'll say...m' taking a few...lines...wid...me...."No one is truly intimate,
    its all in the POCKET'S state"...being the best of the lot...

    p.s (well i won't be real pushy bout it...but do reciprocate)

    www.anugrahism.blogspot.com

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  31. anugrahJuly 16, 2009 at 2:22 PM

    horrified????!!!!.....k now..i want ta make...up...read...my other posts...LOL...( jokes apart...i'd really like u to read dem)

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  32. aravindJuly 18, 2009 at 10:37 PM

    Mater piece of a poetry......was really pleasent reading it

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  33. Harish GovardhanJuly 20, 2009 at 11:33 AM

    I was just looking at your blog by chance.. its brilliant.. very very well written.. Blessed with the skill to express.. Well written...God Bless!

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  34. The GeekieJuly 29, 2009 at 1:10 AM

    beautiful

    m touched :)

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  35. kimAugust 10, 2009 at 1:49 PM

    Thanks allot every one... :)

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  36. workhardSeptember 8, 2009 at 12:06 PM

    That was really nice..

    The pictures good too..


    How to make a website

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  37. PushpzOctober 21, 2009 at 10:25 AM

    Lovely!!! no one is really intimate... loved the pic too
    :)
    Pushpee

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  38. Aditya TibrewalaOctober 25, 2009 at 10:05 PM

    nice, my IB of the month vote goes to you.

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  39. WonderWallOctober 26, 2009 at 4:53 PM

    thanks a lot for you comment and appreciation can you tell me how to ask people to vote for me??? I have no clue...

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