Monday, June 8, 2009

Alone


I walked in the lonely streets,
thinking of the daily trend.
How should a stranger greet?
to make a new TRUE friend.

No one is truly intimate,
its all in the POCKET'S state.
A mere smite of fate,
which i knew it late.

The mind is worried
and the feelings are burried.
My heart does moan,
pity , for now its a stone.

When many were to gather
but none care to bother.
The eyes began to weep,
Tears rolled down the cheek..
Late night i was asleep,
Ah! a nice " HIDE AND SEEK".

I woke up from the dream,
it really made me scream.
The agony of my tone,
oh! i was all ALONE.

39 comments:

  1. Nice baby!
    :)
    Beautifully Written!
    :)
    Keep Empowering!!
    God Bless you and take care !!
    :-)

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  2. thanks for ur comments dear....... :)
    lub ya

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  3. wow superb :)...beautifully written with the right bits of humour.kudos 2 U gal :) ....

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  4. Thanks dear... welcome to my blog :)

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  5. that was amazing...

    I loved the flow of it... the read was a narrative poetry... beautiful..

    do take care mate... cheers...

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  6. that was really nice..
    loved it.

    take care :)

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  7. very nice poem like it ,picture
    is also perfect and beautiful.

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  8. @ Rebel

    Thanks Dear

    @ Silently expressed

    Thanks for your appreciation

    Take care both of you.... :)

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  9. fantastic......purely a masterpiece.....hats down for this creation of yours:)

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  10. @ Damir

    Thanks alot dear.... Keep commenting... :)

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  11. "No one is truly intimate,
    its all in the POCKET'S state.
    A mere smite of fate,
    which i knew it late. "


    hw so true...nice poem

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  12. Hi dear..
    1st time visit..and I was so happy!!
    Lovely poems..
    loved each and every lines..
    tc

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  13. @ alex

    Thanks dear..... i love these lines too

    @ Slow Processor

    Thanks dear... :)

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  14. heyo!!
    nice one....but jus explain me the meaning of 2nd para..cudnt get the clear cut meaning of it..

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  15. and this is a beautiful piece of work :) Move on :) hav fun.

    shravan.

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  16. oh btw, first time here, followin form now on :)

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  18. geeze, Kim,

    yer either missing someone or feelin' lonely. :-(

    'tis great writing-fodder. :-)

    thanks,


    ..
    .ero

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  19. I have tagged you for the 15 books tag..check out my blog... tag me back with ur favourite 15 books...

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  20. dear kim,
    really touching.may i tell u dear,we are always alone.these close frienships and emotions and pack ups and break ups make the life a hell........still,somewhere someone loves you so dearly,helping you to be stable in mind.........so,smile now and try to see the unknown mind......[hey,could be mine!]
    sasneham,
    anu

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  21. B.E.A.U.T.I.F.U.L

    The flow was brilliant :) Love every line :)

    Keep writing!!! :)

    Have a great Sunday :)

    Cheers!!!

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  22. hey really nice poem....:)

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  23. Hi! i visited your blog for the first time and i really appreciate all your stuff which you had posted over here.

    About this poem toh i'll only say that now you get 29th comment, so really you can't repeat"opening up from the dream,
    i find me all alone" :)

    (I joined your google friend connect.. Would be a regular visitor 4m now)

    Best wishes!!

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  24. well....i can gush 'bout da poetry...like my 29 predecessors.....but i'd be redundant....so, i'll say...m' taking a few...lines...wid...me...."No one is truly intimate,
    its all in the POCKET'S state"...being the best of the lot...

    p.s (well i won't be real pushy bout it...but do reciprocate)

    www.anugrahism.blogspot.com

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  25. horrified????!!!!.....k now..i want ta make...up...read...my other posts...LOL...( jokes apart...i'd really like u to read dem)

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  26. Mater piece of a poetry......was really pleasent reading it

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  27. I was just looking at your blog by chance.. its brilliant.. very very well written.. Blessed with the skill to express.. Well written...God Bless!

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  28. Thanks allot every one... :)

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  29. Lovely!!! no one is really intimate... loved the pic too
    :)
    Pushpee

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  30. nice, my IB of the month vote goes to you.

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  31. thanks a lot for you comment and appreciation can you tell me how to ask people to vote for me??? I have no clue...

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