Thursday, June 17, 2010

I will be Stronger

Is it true you love me??
Still you set me free??
You promised for one more try was that lie or I heard it wrong??
I candidly set you above all,

You were the suitor that stood tall.
Or was I suppose to lead you on, In order for you to stay, so you'd be the won?
Is it a Bad dream???

We are not just a couple, but a great team...

We've been through so many tides

Can't we set away our prides?
You told me, You looked constantly at me,
'My beautiful girl,'
you said Love in your eyes
I could see As you lay next to me in bed
'We survived a whole four weeks'
'But we'll last so much longer'
You bent and kissed my cheeks
You made my heart feel stronger
Each subtle touch, skin upon skin, Each longing stare;
Would make my world begin to spin
All it took was for you to be there
Now you say I have slept with many other,
which make me feel oppressed....

I remember us sitting down,
On our favorite bench,
That's when you said..
"I think we should break up."
And that was the end of it,
You were gone,
You got off the bench,
Where we had carved out our names in a heart,

I saw the memories we had together; fade away,

The love of my life walks away.....


  1. Glad To See You After A Long Break :) :) Well, Very Beautiful Excellent Write Up Dear :) :)

    Emotional Poem :) :)

  2. Thanks dear, i never new any one was waiting for my post... generally no one comment on my blog... :(

    I will take care and keep updating my blog...

  3. very nice and touching poem..!!! :)

  4. @ Arpit and Mystic Ray... Thank :)

  5. that's yours? you are a good poet!

  6. @ghetufool... indeed its my creation. Thanks for your appreciation... <3

  7. so, i love the feelings in the poem but a poem, as such is supposed to flow. it should be like butter or maybe cheese melting on pizza crusts. yours is slightly rough. there are few interruptions in between but with time, that too will pass :)

  8. @Raj.... Just to let u know... dont tell me my mistakes >.< this is pissing me off. (Just kidding)